Book info ⭐
Name: A Study In Drowning
Author: Ava Reid
Release Date: September 19th 2023
Edition: Illumicrate UK Hardcover
Pages: 384
Genres: Young Adult, Fantasy, Romance, Gothic, Mystery
Synopsis:
If the monsters are real, so are the women who defeat them.
Effy has always believed in fairy tales. She’s had no choice. Since childhood, she’s been haunted by visions of the Fairy King. She’s found solace only in the pages of Angharad – a beloved epic about a mortal girl who falls in love with the Fairy King, and then destroys him.
Effy’s tattered copy is all that’s keeping her afloat through her stifling first term her prestigious architecture college. So when the late author’s family announces a contest to design his house, Effy fells certain this is her destiny.
But Hiraeth Manor is an impossible a musty, decrepit estate on the brink of crumbling into a hungry sea. And when Effy arrives, she finds she isn’t the only one who’s made a temporary home there. Preston Héloury, a stodgy young literature scholar, is studying Myrddin’s papers and is determined to prove her favourite author is a fraud.
As the two rival students investigate the reclusive author’s legacy, piecing together clues through his letters, books, and diaries, they discover that the house’s foundation isn’t the only thing that can’t be trusted. There are dark forces, both mortal and magical, conspiring against them – and the truth may bring them both to ruin.
MY REVIEW;
I rated this book 3/5 stars!
I’m conflicted with this book. On the one hand I actually got on pretty well with the writing style and the overall vibe was really nice.. on the other.. I feel completely lost. Let me explain why. This book had the atmosphere down to a t, really nice vibes, a little gothic, a little spooky, a little mysterious. But.. we got taken out of it constantly because there was about 4-5 different sub plots that added far too many differing elements to what could of been a strong mystery read.
First you have a war between these two sides which is going on in the background and the basis of the weird dislike our main character Effy initially has for our MMC Preston, we get a little bit of history here but not enough to leave us satisfied and without question. Then you have the history of the sleepers and their magic.. and honestly.. I couldn’t tell you a single bit about them or their history or their relevance because.. we didn’t get enough of them either. Add in cultural divides, misogyny, SA, mental health issues, class divides and well.. it gets a little overwhelming.
There was too much happening for a 300-400 page book. It would of been better if the author decided what path she wanted to go down and stuck to actually strengthening that. She tried too hard to give this book both those cool atmospheric vibes and a complex story. Not a lot of authors seem to be able to seamlessly stitch them together. Reid should of picked atmosphere or story and then really ran with it, if the atmosphere won then reduce the complexity of the backstory.. if the story won, then really flesh out those elements (therefore sacrificing the atmosphere and flow somewhat – but at least we’d understand all those elements better).
And yet again.. no map! We spent most of the book in the ‘Bottom Hundred’ but god knows what that looks like because honestly.. I couldn’t picture it. I just know it’s next to the sea. I have no idea the size of these countries, I have no idea how they’re divided, I have no idea where the estate sits in relevance to everything else. It just wasn’t clear enough. And considering there is talk of multiple places in this book that map would of been so unbelievably useful!
Funny enough I didn’t dislike the characters or the overall plot (although even then there was still some issues and plot holes that should of been an easy fix), Effy had clearly dealt with an awful lot of crap in her life and her inability to control her emotions didn’t irk me like it seemed to for others. I kind of got it. With what she’d faced I’m not surprised at how she acted and responded to certain things… but we didn’t really get any growth from that. By the end of the story she hadn’t really changed all that much. She started to stand up for herself a little but that was about it.. I feel like she could of had this amazing growth of strength and independence and whilst I know it doesn’t always happen like that.. I just think Effy ended up a little one dimensional and a tad on the boring side because of it.
I didn’t love Preston, I didn’t hate him either. He was there, he was ok, he didn’t do anything to wow me but likewise I found him bearable. He was probably a little one dimensional as well to be completely honest but I found his personality somewhat more tolerable. With Preston it felt like you just had to take him as he came. You got what you got and not a lot more, but that kind of worked with his character more than it did with Effys.
The ending section of this book saved it from being a lower rating, the pacing was much better and the plot started to come together. I still have issues with certain elements… I think the ‘fight’ between Effy and the Fairy King was incredibly anti climatic, I think Angharad should of been an actual ghost rather than a living breathing human being, it would of made much more sense in regards to her lack of in person intervention throughout the whole book! (I thought she was a ghost initially.. I only realised at the end when she got her own apartment that.. damn she’s actually real)
Overall I can see the appeal of this book.. I can.. I just think it needed more work. It needed some more defining, some tweaking, some more focus. I don’t think it was bad, I just don’t think it was brilliant either. There was too much going on in the background that the pacing, atmosphere and characters suffered because of it.
Take away the war – we didn’t need it, Effy’s initial dislike of Preston could of come from something else. That’s one element we didn’t need to think about. Add some more details about the Sleepers and the Fairy King, give us a proper fairy tale.. not just odd bits of information here, there and everywhere that we struggle to string together. Give Effy and Preston more passion. We know Effy wants to be in the literature college, we know she loves Mryddin’s work, let her fight for it, let that passion really shine through, let her and Preston really butt heads because of it..
I just think this book could of been more. It could of been better. It could of been stronger.
Let me know what you think in the comments? Have you read this book? Would you want to?
Until next time.
Shannon 😊